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Is this the worst sentence of the year?

It was a dark and stormy night; the rain fell in torrents—except at occasional intervals, when it was checked by a violent gust of wind which swept up the streets (for it is in London that our scene lies), rattling along the housetops, and fiercely agitating the scanty flame of the lamps that struggled against the darkness.

stormyEvery year the Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest  at San Jose State University honours the author of an obscure 1830 novel, Paul Clifford, which opens with this  famous opening sentence. Thousands of writers from around the world compete against each other to come up with something that comes close to the awfulness of the original.

This year Joel Phillips from New Jersey won with this entry:

Seeing how the victim’s body, or what remained of it, was wedged between the grill of the Peterbilt 389 and the bumper of the 2008 Cadillac Escalade EXT, officer “Dirk” Dirksen wondered why reporters always used the phrase “sandwiched” to describe such a scene since there was nothing appetizing about it, but still, he thought, they might have a point because some of this would probably end up on the front of his shirt.

The runner up was submitted by Grey Harlowe:

We can’t let the dastards win,” said Piper Bogdonovich to her fellow gardener, Mr. Sidney Beckworth Hammerstein, as she clenched her gloved hands into gnarly, fuzzed fists, “because if I have to endure another year after which my Royal Puffin buttercups come in second place to Marsha Engelstrom’s Fainting Dove Tear Drop peonies, I will find a machine gun and leave my humanity card in the Volvo.

In the category of Vile Puns these three writers were hard to beat:

As James King, detective in the Queens branch of the NYPD stared at the rooks pecking at the disheveled corpse of Bishop Robert Knight in the alley behind the pawn shop, he checked for his mates.

Old Man Dracula forgot to put his teeth in one night, and so had to come home hungry, with a sort of “nothing dentured, nothing veined” look on his face.

Sherlock Holmes brusquely dismissed his companion’s theory that the victim had died from an allergic reaction to either seasoning or seafood, saying “Watson, although the problem is alimentary, it is neither the Thyme nor the Plaice.

Think you could come up with something worse? Find out more at the official website

photo credit: Storm via photopin (license)

4 comments on “Is this the worst sentence of the year?

  1. The Porcelain Doll
    November 25, 2015

    Reblogged this on perfectlyfadeddelusions.

  2. Mira Prabhu
    November 25, 2015

    Reblogged this on mira prabhu and commented:
    The worst sentence of the year! And how’s this for a bloodthirsty pun?: “Old Man Dracula forgot to put his teeth in one night, and so had to come home hungry, with a sort of “nothing dentured, nothing veined” look on his face.” Read Bridget Whelan’s post for more.

  3. wendyannedarling
    November 28, 2015

    Reblogged this on Wendy Anne Darling and commented:
    Did you ever write a sentence so awful that it cracked you up laughing? Don’t toss it in the trash can! Send it in to You could win a pittance!

    Thanks for sharing this, Bridget. ♥

  4. mysm2000
    November 29, 2015

    Reblogged this on Ms M's Bookshelf and commented:
    A little bit of fun here with a competition for the worst sentence of the year. Today’s Sunday reblog is from Bridget Whelan’s blog and I hope you enjoy it!

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