Writing is a strange, cumbersome, artificial process. It takes a lot of work to make your words clear to the reader.
The comic singer Neil Innes used to start his act with this line: ‘I’ve suffered for my art. Now it’s your turn.’ Don’t be like that…Writing should be an act of generosity, a gift from writer to reader. The gift is the work you’ve put in to make your meaning clear and your sentences a pleasure to read.
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© Bridget Whelan
If you want to use any of this material contact me and there is a very good chance I will say YES.
However, if you just cut and paste into your own blog or whatever and pass it off as your own then there's a very good chance I will find out. Don't fall into the trap of thinking the internet is so vast and expanding so fast (note the fancy internal rhyme)] that no one will know.
if your readers are sniggering on the first page, you’re doing something right.
Depends on the book 🙂
hmm ok, if your readers are reacting with emotion [other than disbelieving horror at too many offences against the English tongue] on the first page you are doing something right. I like to engage with humour, even if the general reading matter is more serious, because in real life, no matter how grim, bathos always manages to slip in somehow. And so it should be in fiction.