Now I don’t expect anyone to dash off a brilliant first sentence – you’re busy, you have presents to buy and wrap, you have meals to plan and journeys to map out, reindeer to feed, all sorts of stuff. But you can dash off a rotten opening sentence to a novel that will never be written. Dull, turgid, boring. A sentence that guarantees a casual reader would put the book straight back on the library or shop shelf…Good luck!
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Moi? I am incapable of doing anything less than brilliant xxx
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Well, that’s just going to have to do! (It’s quite a challenge to write something really dire!)
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And it’s a lucky dip. So anything goes – even good stuff!
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In the right side there is a cupboard, in the left a big mirror. The curtain is brown and full of dust. Kate is sitting in the middle of the room with the bare foot on the old, fad colour carpet….. .
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That’s brilliant Shiva (if far too good). I’m going to stick it on the facebook site so others can see it.
https://www.facebook.com/creativewritingschool
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The sky was grey, and the tree sat in the middle of the forest where it had been for the last hundred years. I yawned.
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Oh that’s pretty good – in a bad sort of way!!
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Reblogged this on theowlladyblog.
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The thing about the monstrosity that walked the verdant countryside by day, and stalked its shadowed fields by night, was that not only did it belong to the very land it skulked – but the scape of greenery had been its family’s legacy for generations.
(I take it poor descriptors, bad punctuation, an inconsistent ‘voice’, and a run-on sentence all count toward building a poor opening line? – See, now I’ve formed a terrible habit! LOL) Enjoy your shopping, gift wrapping, trip planning, reindeer feeding, and most of all, have a Wonderful Holiday Season!
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Delicious – I’ve posted it on my facebook page as well so veryone can see it (and learn!)
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Reblogged this on Julie Wow: Wit or Wittering? and commented:
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Thanks for reblogging
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